This one has been peering over my shoulder for a week now and it's not making a good impression. It's time for radical dismemberment. First I focus on the passages I like and ask myself "Why?" These will be saved. Then I go after the parts that I actively dislike and again question self.
There's rarely ever any middle ground.
Then I get out the Big Knife, er, I mean, scissors...
We will be away from home for most of the day tomorrow...there's a big housewarming party up in the mountains. This one will have to wait.